Shards in the wind...

Subject: Shards in the wind... Fri Feb 20, 2009 4:45 am

Love is still as wonderful and pure as can be
But now i think i finally see
That true love was but an illusion, not a reality for me
After all the time and effort, blood, sweat and tears
After helping you conquer the darkest of fears
Through the fields of doubt and the forests of the unknown
I was always there, so you'd never be alone
I asked for nothing in return, gave you time, gave you space
I was happy just to feel the warmth of your embrace
Just to see that ever radiant smile on your face
Our love grew by the day, every morn sparked anew
But apparently it seemed too good to be true
I disregarded what i saw, what i thought a silly yet bad dream
Little did i know, my own future I had seen
It all happened so suddenly, the love no longer in view
You had become someone I'd never seen, never met, never knew
Your heart I had mended, with tender love and care
Mine in shards at my feet, bewildered as to how it got there
Searching for answers, a reason why we couldn't be
The truth revealed, my eyes opened, the problem was me
The way i think, the way i feel, the things i do, the things i say
It seems im the only person that's made up this way
From happiness to despair, no armor or bulwark
The all too familiar feeling, of being alone in the dark
This seems to be the place, hate as i might i must belong
And the words "wait and bleed" come to mind from that song
Unloved and unwanted
Like trash well discarded
Despite the billow of flame, like dragons of old
Utterly powerless, unable..to keep out the cold
With a new look on life, the truth i now see
Frozen..alone...is prolly how i was meant to be..

Subject: Re: Shards in the wind... Fri Feb 20, 2009 5:10 pm

I never knew you were a poet. Not bad

Subject: Re: Shards in the wind... Fri Feb 20, 2009 8:27 pm

I'm not...

just a few thoughts on "paper" is all

Subject: Re: Shards in the wind... Fri Feb 20, 2009 9:26 pm

Reddragon wrote:: I'm not...

just a few thoughts on "paper" is all

you might think its just some writing but your random thoughts are quite good. Seriously good. You have quite the way with words.

I remember feeling similar once Sad

Subject: Re: Shards in the wind... Fri Feb 20, 2009 9:30 pm

Link wrote:

Reddragon wrote:: I'm not...

just a few thoughts on "paper" is all

you might think its just some writing but your random thoughts are quite good. Seriously good. You have quite the way with words.

I remember feeling similar once Sad

Its a true story to be honest..but such is life, and then there's Wallgreens..

Subject: Re: Shards in the wind... Fri Feb 20, 2009 9:33 pm

Reddragon wrote:: Its a true story to be honest..but such is life, and then there's Wallgreens..[/color]

LOL... I see that most people are at their writing best once going through some major pain. I hardly see any good happy poems.

Subject: Re: Shards in the wind... Fri Feb 20, 2009 9:40 pm

Roffle..so true, i need to try that.

..a happy poem..think happy thoughts... ... ... phail. Ill try again later.

Subject: Re: Shards in the wind... Fri Feb 20, 2009 9:41 pm

At least you express yourself using words unlike some people who walk into a workplace or school with a gun and shoot random(nut) people

Subject: Re: Shards in the wind... Fri Feb 20, 2009 9:55 pm

Yeah..shooting real ppl is retarded. Play Counterstrike Source, Unreal 3, Unreal 2k4, Listen to some music, Cry if you must , but there are far better ways to deal with certain things in life...

Subject: Re: Shards in the wind... Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:23 pm

At least there are still some mature people left on jubecron

Subject: Re: Shards in the wind... Sat Mar 07, 2009 7:58 pm

good work dude

Subject: Re: Shards in the wind... Sat Mar 21, 2009 3:20 am

iBlacknite wrote:: good work dude

Thanks man..

Subject: Re: Shards in the wind... Tue Mar 24, 2009 1:51 pm

Papouch wrote:: At least there are still some mature people left on jubecron

and that bunch includes u?

Subject: Re: Shards in the wind... Tue Apr 07, 2009 2:12 pm

I like this poem!! It's pretty good :-)

Subject: Re: Shards in the wind... Tue Apr 07, 2009 8:54 pm

Reddragon wrote:: I asked for nothing in return, gave you time, gave you space
I was happy just to feel the warmth of your embrace
Just to see that ever radiant smile on your face
Our love grew by the day, every morn sparked anew
But apparently it seemed too good to be true
I disregarded what i saw, what i thought a silly yet bad dream
Little did i know, my own future I had seen
It all happened so suddenly, the love no longer in view
You had become someone I'd never seen, never met, never knew
Your heart I had mended, with tender love and care
Mine in shards at my feet, bewildered as to how it got there
Searching for answers, a reason why we couldn't be
The truth revealed, my eyes opened, the problem was me
The way i think, the way i feel, the things i do, the things i say
It seems im the only person that's made up this way
From happiness to despair, no armor or bulwark
The all too familiar feeling, of being alone in the dark
This seems to be the place, hate as i might i must belong
And the words "wait and bleed" come to mind from that song
Unloved and unwanted
Like trash well discarded
Despite the billow of flame, like dragons of old
Utterly powerless, unable..to keep out the cold
With a new look on life, the truth i now see
Frozen..alone...is prolly how i was meant to be..

This part of the poem states what i now currently go though.
I wont say i like this poem cause it like my feelings of hurt and sleepless night are rub right back in my face.
So i've decide to lot the cold rush in and the darkness fill me up
and lot loneliness be my friend.
I would never wish what im going though on any one