Butterfly
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Weapon: My Brain
Class:  Monk
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 | Subject: Life's not fair  Wed Jul 23, 2008 2:30 pm | |
| How do u hold back tears and hide your sorrow
when the damp,cold air is pungent with the smell of death
and characterized by hopelessness??
How do you stop pain from penetrating your armour
that you've spent night and day perfecting??
How??
How do you protect a mother from grief
brought upon her by the death of her child
whom she couldn't protect??
How??
Why does pain and hurt exist??
Life's not fair | |
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| | Subject: Re: Life's not fair Wed Jul 23, 2008 10:25 pm | |
| I always enjoyall your poems and this one is no exception. (feels like a rising stars judge)
you should take writing seriously | |
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Butterfly
Elite Member
Number of posts : 396
Location : here
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Points : 131
Registration date : 2008-01-11
Character sheet
Weapon: My Brain
Class: Monk
HP:
(50/50)
| | Subject: Re: Life's not fair Fri Jul 25, 2008 4:38 pm | |
| Thanx. I am thinkin of takin up writin p[rofessionally. I'm startin with short stories now. I'll let u read it wen i'm thru. | |
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